Alyssa Blair - Colored

I used a blouse from the 1930's as inspiration. Also, I badly need some feedback. Please check out her bio below and critique it. Please!

Ink Files - Alyssa BlairGeneral

Full Name: Alyssa Blair
Nickname: Aly
Age: 55
Gender: Female
Birthday: March 23rd
Species/Race: Human
Ethnicity: White
Occupation: Animator (previous), hobbyist animator/artist (current)
PS: Aly's previous occupation dealt with working for Joey Drew as one of the animators for some of the episodes for Alice Angel and a guest animator for Bendy the Dancing Demon and Boris the Wolf. After abruptly quitting, 30 years have passed where she is has been a stay at home artist. She did odd jobs in cartoon animation as commissions to pay the bills and her mother's nursing home bills, however, she's currently turned up missing...
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Appearance



This is a drawing of her when she started her job 30 or so years prior.
Body Build: Overweight
Height

Art/Alyssa (c) MaddyPooh 
Bendy and the Ink Machine (c) The Meatly